Dame Nellie Melba

Nellie’s singing and humming around the house use to drive her dad crazy. But she always wanted to be a professional performer. She sailed to Europe to chase her dream and became the greatest opera singer in the world. She was wealthy and raised enormous amount of money for charity.

Mary MacKillop

Mary MacKillop is Australia’s first saint. She had a dream to educate poor kids and she stood up against priests for what she thought was right.

Who knew these women could acoplish so much. I never knew they could fly beond the clouds.

Hi Liam ,
Your 100wc was very discriptive for example you made it sounded like the man was very tall.I didn’t think you meant this but it kind of sound like a poem aswell as a story.
Good job!!!
From Erika

Hi Soph,
You did an amazing 100wc.
I liked how you used a light struck and you made that very intresting and you made it quiet sudden. You could just re-read and make sure your 100wc has correct spelling and punctuation.
From Erika

Hi Thomas,
Your 100wc was very intresting but fast. You also made the first paraghrape about war but then you made into a robot story it was a bit confusing.
But after all it was an amazing 100wc!
From Erika

 

I was there at the airport but no one I new was there execpted Millie for some reson. Millie helped me through this hard time I was going through. I hop over to her but then my foot falls to the ground and I start to walk. I hug her as tight as I could. We walked over to a gate without going through security.

A lady with a very strange, fake fur coat was looking towards me and waving but then a man with a suit on went straight through me not even knocking me over. Not even touching me. He just went straight through me. I start to coughf a lot.

 

I forgot about it and went on with Millie who was lining up in the que. Run up to her and take her hand and went side by side dogding people, running past the lady asking for passports untill we land up at the front of the line going in the plane.

Suddenly we move no we fly to the wing on the plane. look down now wer’e in the middle of the air on wing.

I blink again and there i am on a hospital bed  with Millie, my mum and my dad sitting around me.

This is what happens when you have one foot and a cancer in my lungs.

 

As I looked towards the front of the school I saw a bright red poppy sitting there on the floor.It didn’t move in the wind, but it didn’t stay completely still either. Someone had yelled something across the playground so i looked over, but nobody was there. The voice came again, “Get down!!” but still nobody was there. I went back to the poppy and it was gone. I moved my eyes back towards the voice and I saw a man in a uniform with a rifle in his hand. I jumped down behind a sandbag and there I was, in the middle of a battlefield. 

Hi Jennifer,
Your 100wc is amazing I like how it seemed that it was such a normal day AND THEN, you also made it seem quite funny with your last few sentences it got me wanting to read more.

I got a little bit confoused with the first sentence stating; Ahhhhhh, what a wonderful day to walk in the park, especially if everything is chaos our house. Were you meaning to say that everything is chaos in our house, or close to our house because choas means crazy or mayhem. I didn’t think that was what you were trying to say.

But other than that was a great 100wc and I think you should be very proud of that!!
From Erika

 

Hello Jeyda,
Your 100wc was interesting by how it was diffrent and not about a normal statue.

I think that you may have forgot about your punctuction when writing this amazing peice.

You did a very good move by putting it in a 3 year olds perspective it was very clever and helpful to your peice.
From Erika

 

Hi Hanna,
I thought that you made the story build up and the problem feel even bigger than it could be. It made you stop and and then you go on you and your’e left on a clif hanger.

Just what 100wc was this amazing story from i couldn’t find it on the 100wc.
From Erika
P.S. I found this new thing called pobble 365 it is like 100wc exepted you can choose how long it is, it also gives you a story starter if you need it.

Purple goes in a certain circle,

A shade like a curtain,

It sparkles.

It feels like a portal,

It has patterns like a green turtle,

It has purpose.

It sounds like a circus,

It is written like a little girl’s journal,

 And looks like marble.

It is never ever hurtful,

Its eyes even looks like a mortal.

It’s herbal.

This thing is a person.

 

1/2+2/4=1

3/6-1/2=0

3 1/4 + 1 1/8= 4 3/8

You kick

You hit

You flick

And you have a stick.

 

And it’s called it sport,

It’s like a fort.

 

You have a small and big pitch

And you make a ditch.

 

There’s hockey, soccer, football, netball, swimming and lots more.

It’s like a war.

 

A game is played

No one is afraid.

You play night,

Till light

That’s the game

 

But all the same,

You’ve won

By having fun

 

It’s never done

Even when your twenty one.

It was like any other day; I went to school, felt bored, finished class and started a new subject. Over and over again, nothing changing.

 I grabbed some aluminium foil to play with so I wouldn’t go off with the clouds. Maths, the worst! I scratched the foil on the table to make it smoother. I shaped it into a weird thing with a long body, yet small head and huge feet. 

After school, I put my sculpture down and collapsed into bed. When I woke, I looked around and it wasn’t there. I opened my curtain and it was standing in the middle of the roundabout.

 

I grab an avocado instead of my usual apple and stand to leave. A figure is blocking my way. It looks like a massive avocado so I rub my eyes and look again. There is a green, pear-shaped avocado.

My mum appears in the other doorway, but she doesn’t see the big avocado staring down on me. My mum is usually like an elephant when it comes to finding things, she is always so clever. I look back at the avocado and now it’s purple! I forget about it and go out the other way.

There are seahorses’ skeletons flying around the town. You can only see their bones. Creepy!!